I think my IQ went down a few thousand points when I read this.
That…doesn’t sound good…
Light A Way
Maybe it’s because you write the scene that way?
Submission from Stevie: I read half of this before I gave up, to prevent my brain from melting any further. There’s also a sequel.
…I love tongue battles too!
For the Love
A foreign push on the right direction
…How could you spell everything wrong?
This is under a “read more” because it is rated M. The story in itself is not that bad but there was a shining jem of a line I had to post.
Not only does she have a ridiculous name and is a master of everything, she’s also a princess. Plus, Malfoy is a her bitch.
"…my name is Samantha SilverMoon. I am a new student at Hogwarts this year. I take it the rest of you already knew who I was?"
"Yes Mr. Potter, I am royalty. Not only in the magicalw orld but also in line for the Crown of England."
Hermione blushed, clutching her book tighter.”Thank you, Princess. In my readings I have seen that you are supposed to be themost intelligent woman of our generation. You have already reached mastery levels in defense, are fully trained in law, healing, history, and art.” Sam laughed and nodded again.